Sunday, October 10, 2010


My favorite dusk.
I remember clearly my 16th birthday. I received a valuable gift from nature. At that moment the nature showed me the most beautiful scenary; the environment was accomplice, and my feelings emerged from sleeping time. It was a memorable and cute event.

The afternoon was coming, I was sitting on the warm sand and I was playing with it, it was soft; the grains of sand were traveling in my hands, its texture made me feel a kind of massage. I was sitting alone and I observed that the beach looked clean, there were few people, I think the reason was that the beach was located far away in comparison to another. Time passed and the dusk began on the horizon with a special armony as a song.

The dusk looked as a perfect painting in the sky. The sky was reddish, the sun was the center of my world at that moment, it was making a deal with the sea, its reflex on the crystalline water was elegant, and the water movement gave life. A white seagull was passing and crossed the sky line; bird´s plumage shone with the sunbeams as a star in the night. 

My feelings and thoughts emerged suddenly with that special environment. The relaxing sound of the sea and the fresh breeze touching my body made me feel peace, I forgot for a period  of time that I was on the beach and not in a dream;  by surprise  a unexpected sigh left my.  I asked myself how a dusk on the beach could make me feel that? At the moment I did not have any answer, so I decided to enjoy that amazing scene and keep it in my memory as photography in an album.

Undoubtedly it is my favorite dusk. I could have the opportunity to be in the right place at the right time. In the far away horizon, I saw more than a simple and daily dusk. I observed as God was painted in the sky one of his masterpieces dedicated to humanity. This experience gave me peace and relaxation that I never felt before.


2 comments:

  1. Hi yajis..!!!!
    I think that you chose to describe a beutiful moment, and i think that you were so lucky to saw that..... even when here in Aguascalientes also the Twilights are also spectacular.
    As a general comment just read it again maybe you can change some tenses, and also your 4th paragtaph is notably bigger than the others.....!!!! GOOD JOB....!!!

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  2. Hello Yajaira:
    I think that you should be careful on the size of the paragraphs because you have one small, one big, small, big and small.
    Your essay it's well done, it's very clear, but personally I get bored while I was reading your essay, it's not my intention to make feel bad, but that's what I felt. But in general you did a good job.

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